roughhhh from Jack Stokoe on Vimeo.

In this video I give a directors commentary over the video so far.

I address these subject areas:

-the need to re-shoot the first scene due to no picture being inside the sleeve of the record

-the need to improve the editing so the video cuts with the beat

- using the reverse edit on premier pro to keep the action match.

- whether I should use archive footage in my Peirce ( due to my approval of the 1073 fa cup final footage)

- how I've cut the footage by the glass door due to the cameraman's refection ( me)

- the use of slow motion at the scene on the beach and the effectiveness of it to the wider story

-  how the ending is an anti climax and how it needs to be re-shot